1. you thing about what you did one day and then make a tittle of the best part of the day you were thinking about.
2. you write all about what hapend that day from the begining to the end.
3. you look at the story you maid and think of better words, lets say you wrote: then instead write later.
4. you read the story and think where to add parts that you forgot to write about.
5. you read the story to see if you like, and if you do like the story, you could show all your friends the story you maid
3 comments:
That was an exciting adventure!! We would have loved to have gone with you.
I think there will be many more families who will be encouraged to go to "Water Park" because you wrote your story so nicely. Some day you may be a champion writer because you are starting at 8 years!!
Grandma and Grandpa Stern
Wow! Shaltiel! Great power words: "slamming" on the elevator button
and the elevator "rocking and rolling"
Nice touch: adding the picture of the Tiger's player signing your shirt! Great story!
Love,
Bubbe
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